Reddit reviews Going Bearserk: A Viking Shifter Romance

Hi!

I post here sometimes, but I'm using a different username today.

I published THIS for my first book. It's a time travel paranormal romance. Now I'm wondering if the cover/blurb are awful, as I'm working on a second book in the same world (not a series, but a set of standalones.)

For the book in the same world, I've mocked up a cover that needs work, but maybe has some direction: here.

I'd appreciate advice on either one of these. Thanks so much!

I'm a new author! My first book, Going Bearserk, was just released!

It's only 99 cents/Free in Kindle Unlimited!

Blurb for Going Bearserk: A Viking Shifter Romance

Lana:

I never believed in scary stories. Now I know better.

Now I’m on the run, looking for a new life. One where I can be free from my family’s expectations and safe from the darkness I discovered.

Enter Iohan, the mysterious and sexy stranger who rescues me from a mishap in the mountains. He’s a bit odd, sure, but he’s over six feet of jaw-dropping, muscular handsomeness. He also seems determined to protect me. Surely I can’t have found my new life already—and not with this man. After all, I’m beginning to suspect Iohan has a secret of his own…

Iohan:

I am a warrior with no battles to fight. Ripped from my time by a mysterious curse, I am destined to wait out the rest of my days alone. I have no faith, no family, no home.

When Lana appears in my mountains, she unlocks something inside of me. Something that I thought I could never feel again. She is running, and I am drawn to protect her. To make her mine. I can only hope that I will not become more dangerous to her than what she is running from…

Going Bearserk is a standalone novella (25k+) with a HEA

Read it here