Reddit reviews Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace (11th Edition)
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Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace. (If it's too pricey, get an older edition, or get it second-hand.)
Read this book to learn how to write effectively, as opposed to grammatically correctly. Based on your post, your grasp of grammar looks fine.
Knowing the rules of grammar and punctuation won't make you a good writer any more than knowing the rules of chess will make you a good chess player. (And, just like in chess, the rules obviously still matter.)
For word usage and writing style issues, I'd highly recommend the book Style: Ten Lessons in Clarity and Grace by Joseph M. Williams. Here's the US version: http://www.amazon.com/Style-Lessons-Clarity-Grace-Edition/dp/0321898680
And I second the tip below to read things out loud to yourself!